I agree with Dr. Bang in that your unique translation is better than the original.
One of my golfing buddies died of cancer a couple of years ago. His wife gave me his favorite putter which I've used until now and a collection of golf-related books, one of which is this book and I love stories, particularly when Dr. Han translates them into our mother-tongue.
(which I didn't read).
Therefore, I read 3 times.
How did I do that?
I read, I read and I read
To Memorize(and quote someday).